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Post by Kamex on Jan 23, 2015 22:20:13 GMT -5
app.box.com/s/6yt34tm64dtu18ax7fko8mclilne2d9aTitle pretty much explains it all. I have this remix that I've worked on for 6 hours already, and I have no clue what it's missing, if anything at all. Am I doing something wrong? Or is my own judgment a bit too critical?
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Post by Hydra1520 on Jan 23, 2015 23:13:47 GMT -5
I can tell you have put a lot of effort into this project and it definitely sounds great but I do recognize that somethings can be tweaked or added to make it even better. I really like the part with the trumpets and the transition to the more hardcore part, but I just feel like some of the song sounds too close to the original (not that that's bad, just I feel like that might be the source of why it doesn't sound right). Perhaps try to use a variety of instruments or try blending hardcore and a little bit of another style like dubstep or something. Idk these are just ideas and I could be completely wrong, but I figured I'd give my opinion. Anyways, great job Kamex, you never disappoint.
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Post by VanilluxePavilion on Jan 23, 2015 23:29:01 GMT -5
Hey, Kamex. I'm not a professional at this kind of stuff, but I wanted to see if I could help out at all. During the 4 measures at 1:25 where the original bass progression kicks in and the strings get higher, I feel like there can be some more harmonics in the mid range to compliment the strings. And maybe lower the output level of the bass just slightly at those sections. Also, 4 measures starting from 1:10 and another 4 starting at 1:20, it seems to get a little quiet. Maybe because the low end frequencies are taking up a lot of space during the other parts. Other than that though, everything seems pretty well balanced. I hope I helped a little bit. xP Great job!
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Post by SelectiveSuicune on Jan 25, 2015 0:13:56 GMT -5
Woaaaaah Kamex, I wanna start off with saying that this is probably your best work overall, in my opinion.
I would change very few things, but if I had to change things to make this remix perfect, here's what I'd change.
Around 0:38 - 0:46, I would add a little something to make the song sound busier. It sounds a little empty around there because before and after that part, the song is busy.
I would also change the trumpets somehow, I like the idea of using trumpets but the trumpet you used in particular sounds "artificial" I guess, idk how to explain it. Also, I would add another instrument around 1:10 - 1:15. But as Hydra said, you never disappoint! Can't wait to hear this on YouTube :]
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